The feedback I received from my target audience was quite positive with some good constructive feedback which I have taken note of in order to improve my final draft.
Examples of my audiences’ feedback are:
What do you like about my project at this stage?
· Good banner “world number 1 music magazine”.
· Good layout and structure of double page spread.
· Great images of David Guetta.
· Good consistent colour scheme and layout of front cover.
· Good quotes and easy to read and good structure of double page spread.
What could be improved about my project?
· Contents page is to white.
· Double Page Spread is not cut out very well.
· Face of editor needs to be cut out better.
· Photos of the week are too crammed and unclear.
· The type of font for title.
· Strapline should be slightly smaller.
· Background of some images could be better.
From my rough cut feedback I have decided to make the following improvements to my music magazine:
Front Cover
· Change the font and slant of the masthead’s name.
· Make sure the banner over the chest of the large image a more interesting shape.
· Cut out the image and place a background behind it, to remove the shadow.
· Change “picture of the week” to “gig of the month”.
Contents Page
· Change font of contents to a more blocky style font.
· Change page numbers font and size.
· Remove the photo of the CD’s.
· Increase the size of photo for “photo of week” and change it to “gig of the month”.
· Correct spelling of subscriping to subscribing.
· Change editor’s photo.
· Change some of the fonts.
Double Page Spread
· Smooth out the photo cutting and place a background behind the photo.
· Change the style of the page number.
· Correct some spelling and grammar mistakes
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